The Wonder tree By:cooper
A little old woman gave me a bean that had dots on it . I planted it in the ground and it grew and it finally it was giant.I asked for secret hide out it had a pool inside 0f it.I found a robber suit inside it so I could rob the bank and I had cameras.
Reflection: In writing I am learning to add detail to my story. I am proud because I can write bigger stories. I need to improve on having more ideas.
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You have made excellent progress in adding more detail to your writing. Keep going! Mrs Platt and Mrs Robertson
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